3-23th Homework

Hello, [이름]!

A cold but still wonderful Tuesday to you. ^_^

Thank you very much for once again writing in our composition board and sharing your opinion in our topic.

I think the main reason why people continue to look for solutions despite the existing ones is because they want to improve the efficiency of their work.

They also want to achieve more convenience in order to save time and energy.

People are curious by nature and they always ask what lies ahead.

They always wonder what\'s in store for them and make an effort to look for an answer.

Anyhow, that is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you on Thursday. ^^

~Teacher C[이름] :)

Finding solutions to problems is always very exciting for me.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> For me, finding solutions to problems is always very exciting.
After finishing, it is very delighting.

>> [Do you mean]: After accomplishing it, it is very delighting.
We may face the problems to resolve, nobody wants to be let it.

>> We may face some problems to resolve and nobody wants to experience them.
Sometimes, we could not find an answer.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There will be times when we could not find an answer.
And then, we try to find another answer or we try to think about it through another way.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> And then, we try to look for another answer or we try to look at things in another perspective.
 Or we want to find another solution even if there is already a solution to problems.

>> Sometimes, we want to find another solution even if there is already a solution to these/the problems.
The reason would be why it is less efficient or too much prohibitive to apply for the problems.

>> The reason would be, it is less efficient or too much prohibitive to apply/use to the problems.
I think there would be many reasons.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my opinion, there are many reasons that should be considered.
So, the science and technology have been developed by these reasons.

>> So, science and technology have been developed.

OR >> For these reasons, science and technology have been developed. 

OR >> That\'s the reason why, science and technology have been developed. 

Sometimes, it would be not useful.

>> Sometimes, it would not be useful.
In real life, to fine new solutions we have to think more and more.

>> In real life, to find new solutions we have to think more and more.
It\'s because we don\'t have enough time to afford it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s because we don\'t have the luxury of time. 

In the everyday morning, we have to commute to work and we have to do something.

>> Every morning, we have to commute to work and we have to do something.
So, some people don\'t find new solution but uses the solution which is already done instead.

>> So, some people don\'t find a new solution but use the solution which is already existing.

Some people try to find new solution even if many people are satisfied with the solution.

>> Some people try to find a new solution even if many people are satisfied with the solution.