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2015-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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I like watching TV. Also I really like romantic dramas. However, these days I didn't watch the dramas for weekdays because of my children. Most romantic dramas start at 10:00 PM. When I watch it, my children want to watch them with me. They have to go to bed early so I give up watching TV. However I watch TV on the weekend. I can watch them with a rerun. Most dramas reruns every weekend. When I am watching TV, I can't do anything. So I start to change my weekend with my children. I go to the library every weekend and I will keep it for a long time. My husband tells me watching TV is not a hobby.

강사 첨삭

    Hello [이름]!   I appreciate your effort to edit your answers. Some reminders: When I watch them, my children want to watch them with me. (You have to be consistent. Remember that if you\'re referring to you, or we, or I, or one try to remain consistently within the same case. )   Teacher Venus^^   I like watching TV. >>>CORRECT Also I really like romantic dramas.>>>CORRECT   However, these days I didn\'t watch the dramas for weekdays because of my children.>>>However, these days I don\'t watch the dramas on weekdays because of my children.   Most romantic dramas start at 10:00 PM.>>>CORRECT   When I watch it, my children want to watch them with me.>>>When I watch them, my children want to watch them with me. They have to go to bed early so I give up watching TV.>>>CORRECT   However I watch TV on the weekend.>>>CORRECT   I can watch them with a rerun.>>>I can watch a rerun of my favorite TV show.   Most dramas reruns every weekend.>>>Most drama series airing reruns every weekend.   When I am watching TV, I can\'t do anything. >>>CORRECT So I start to change my weekend with my children. >>>So I start to change my weekend activities with my children. I go to the library every weekend and I will keep it for a long time. >>>CORRECT My husband tells me watching TV is not a hobby. >>>CORRECT

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