3.24 homework

2023-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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After leave my hometown life is little lonely, but it is very funny. Because I don’t have to listen my mon’s nitpick. And if I call my friend. But it is hard to make a cook. So I would be take out or eating out. It is hard to leave alone, but it can be independent. And sometimes I miss my family and my friends. But it is good opportunity to leave alone.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!
Practice will always make progress. So just keep going!
-Hanna ^^
After leave my hometown life is little lonely, but it is very funny.
>>After leaving my hometown, life was a little lonely but fun.
Because I don’t have to listen my mon’s nitpick.
>>Because won\'t hear my mom\'s nitpick.
And if I call my friend.
>>And I can call my friend.
But it is hard to make a cook.
>>But it is hard to cook.
So I would be take out or eating out.
>>So I usually buy a take out food or eat out.
It is hard to leave alone, but it can be independent.
>>It is hard to live alone but you can be independent.
And sometimes I miss my family and my friends.
>>Correct
But it is good opportunity to leave alone.
>>But it is a good opportunity to grow when you live alone.

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