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2023-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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I think that the best commute is by walk. But there is many situation of the life. So if I can better than bicycle. And by bus. I think that it is not good to commute by taxi. Because it is too expensive and also it is not good for environment. I think buy own car is better than taxi. So saving environment by commute is by walking. It also good for health.

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Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!
Keep going and you\'ll be great!
-Hanna ^^
I think that the best commute is by walk.
>>I think the best way to commute is by walking.
But there is many situation of the life.
>>But it depends on your situation in life.
So if I can better than bicycle.
>>So I think it is better than riding a bicycle.
And by bus.
>>And by riding a bus too.
I think that it is not good to commute by taxi.
>>Correct
Because it is too expensive and also it is not good for environment.
>>Because it is too expensive and it is also not good for the environment.
I think buy own car is better than taxi.
>>I think buying my own car is better than taking a taxi.
So saving environment by commute is by walking.
>>Walking can save the environment.
It also good for health.
>>It is also good for the health.

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