3-24th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^__^

Thank you for promptly answering our essay question for today.

I enjoyed reading your opinions.

I think both points are important.

A good salary and satisfaction are both important in living a happy life.

However, it is true that most people go for a high paying job rather than a job that satisfies them.

Maybe it\'s because the prices of commodities nowadays are too high.

People choose to be practical rather than satisfied or happy in order to survive.

Anyhow, that is my opinion in relation to this matter.

I hope you\'re having a great time at work.

See you again tomorrow.

Take care always.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

I think the pay and the satisfaction when you find a job are not exclusive, and then both are also important.

>> I think the pay and the satisfaction when you find a job are not exclusive, and both are also important.
However,there is no work for us to be satisfied with both in the world.

>> [Do you mean]: However,there is no work that would satisfy both in the/this world.
If you have a good skill, you must get the money that is available.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If you are skillful, you must take the available money.
And if you get a lot of money, you have to work for it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> And if you get a lot of money, it\'s because you worked hard for it.

For the first time, when we try to find and apply the job and then finally we get the job, we first seriously consider about the pay and the future of us.

>> [Do you mean]: At first, when we try to find, apply, and get a job, we seriously consider the payment and the future we would have.
I think the satisfaction is related with the future of us.

>> I think the satisfaction is related with our future.
So, many new beginners want to find an appropriate job for them.

>> So, many beginners want to find an appropriate job for them.

OR >> So, many new individuals want to find an appropriate job for them.
Sometimes, even if they get a lot of money, they would often like to give up the job which they could not find their future in the applied job.

>> Sometimes, even if they get a lot of money, they would often like to give up the job because they don\'t see their future in it.

Sometimes, even if they satisfied with the job\'s quality or future, they take a job since they want to get a lot money.

>> [Do you mean]: Sometimes, even if they are not satisfied with the job\'s quality or future, they take a job since they want to get a lot of money.

In this case, most of them have a thought that they will work for a short time until they get the money they want.

>> In this case, most of them have a thought that they will work for a short time until they get the amount of money that they want.
Anyway, to get the job is important.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Anyway, getting the job is important.