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I choose entertainment programs.
I think laughing is very important our live.
So I like watching comedy shows.
My favorite comedy program is Running Man.
When I watch this program, I can forget my stress.
This program is a famous program in Korea.
Also I like to watch educational program but when I watch it, sometimes I have some stress because learning is very difficult to me.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You have a good idea about the topic. Just don\'t forget your prepositions.
example: in our lives
Teacher Venus^^
I choose entertainment programs.
>>>CORRECT
I think laughing is very important our live.
>>>I think laughing is very important in our lives.
So I like watching comedy shows.
>>>CORRECT
My favorite comedy program is Running Man.
>>>CORRECT
When I watch this program, I can forget my stress.
>>>CORRECT
This program is a famous program in Korea.
>>>CORRECT
Also I like to watch educational program but when I watch it, sometimes I have some stress because learning is very difficult to me.
>>>CORRECT
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