3.25 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good afternoon? It is raining now here in Changwon Korea.
Spring rain is helpful for farmer. I guess it will be sweet rain for us.
Homework
I don't like to go shopping with my wife. Because she is always weak to make a decision and she hesitate to buy something.It takes so many times. Sometimes I feel bored about that. Occasionally I like shopping on the internet, when I need to buy some books.
The most popular place to shop in my hometown is LOTTE department store. LOTTE is the famous department store in Korea and it's here in Changwon which I live in as well.
Thank you! I am wondering if my son is doing well in his class. I want you force and stress to him. Byebye!
강사 첨삭
GOOD AFTERNOON MR. [이름]!!!
I enjoyed reading your composition today. Youa re lucky because Lotte Department Store is located in your homewtown. You don\'t need to go far if you want to buy something. Anyway, I hope that you enjoy reading the books that you bought. Happy reading and enjoy shopping!
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon? It is raining now here in Changwon Korea.>> Correct!
Spring rain is helpful for farmer.
>> Spring rain is helpful for farmers.
I guess it will be sweet rain for us.
>> I guess it will be a sweet rain for us.HomeworkI don\'t like to go shopping with my wife.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I don\'t like shopping with my wife.
Because she is always weak to make a decision and she hesitate to buy something.
>> Because she\'s always weak when making a decision and she hesitates to buy something.
It takes so many times.
>> Did you mean: It is time consuming.
Sometimes I feel bored about that.
>> Sometimes I feel bored because of that.
Occasionally I like shopping on the internet, when I need to buy some books.
>> Correct!The most popular place to shop in my hometown is LOTTE department store.
>> Correct!
LOTTE is the famous department store in Korea and it\'s here in Changwon which I live in as well.>> LOTTE is the most famous department store in Korea which is in Changwon, and it\'s where I live too.Thank you! I am wondering if my son is doing well in his class.
>> Correct!
I want you force and stress to him.
>> I want you to force him to study.
Byebye!
>> Correct!
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