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I will need a had from my parents when I got a baby later.
I have a job and I want to keep my career as long as possible.
It is very selfish, but I will strongly need their hands.
I don\'t want to perfectly stand on my own after getting married.
I became financially independent from my parents when I wan an undergraduate student with a part-time job.
Since I lived in my parent\'s home at that time without any rent fee, it may not have been complete independence.
But rather, after getting married, I often needed a hand from my parents because everything was new to us.
When we bought the first car and house, we didn\'t know well because we never did it before.
However, my parents well knew because they already experienced it.
I thought that my parents were guardians before marriage, but they are kind of seniors in life after marriage.
Furthermore, they want to help and sacrifice as much as possible when I want or need it.
Sometimes I feel so happy that I have parents to help me infinitely.
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Hi [이름],
That was really quick! Thanks as always for the prompt reply and for sharing your opinions to all questions I ask you:) and the sentences are mostly correct, so great job!
That was really quick! Thanks as always for the prompt reply and for sharing your opinions to all questions I ask you:) and the sentences are mostly correct, so great job!
-Rachel
I will need a hand from my parents when I got a baby later. I have a job and I want to keep my career as long as possible.
>> correct
It is very selfish, but I will strongly need their hands. I don\'t want to perfectly stand on my own after getting married.
It is very selfish, but I will strongly need their hands. I don\'t want to perfectly stand on my own after getting married.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
I became financially independent from my parents when I wan an undergraduate student with a part-time job.
I became financially independent from my parents when I wan an undergraduate student with a part-time job.
>> correct (perfect!)
Since I lived in my parent\'s home at that time without any rent fee, it may not have been complete independence.
Since I lived in my parent\'s home at that time without any rent fee, it may not have been complete independence.
>> correct
But rather, after getting married, I often needed a hand from my parents because everything was new to us.
But rather, after getting married, I often needed a hand from my parents because everything was new to us.
>> correct
When we bought the first car and house, we didn\'t know well because we never did it before.
When we bought the first car and house, we didn\'t know well because we never did it before.
>> correct (amazing)
However, my parents well knew because they already experienced it.
However, my parents well knew because they already experienced it.
>> However, my parents knew it well because they already experienced it.
I thought that my parents were guardians before marriage, but they are kind of seniors in life after marriage.
I thought that my parents were guardians before marriage, but they are kind of seniors in life after marriage.
>> correct
Furthermore, they want to help and sacrifice as much as possible when I want or need it. Sometimes I feel so happy that I have parents to help me infinitely.
Furthermore, they want to help and sacrifice as much as possible when I want or need it. Sometimes I feel so happy that I have parents to help me infinitely.
>> correct (perfect)
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