3-25th Homework

Hello, [이름]!

It\'s a cold but beautiful Friday again to us.

I am really in awe with this composition.

I loved reading your opinions in relation to our topic for today.

I agree that criticisms should be taken constructively instead of personally.

Doing such would help a person grow professionally.

It\'s difficult to please everybody but the best thing a person could do is to carefully consider his/her decisions and make sure that he/she is doing the right thing.

It\'s difficult to be on the right path every time but it\'s for the best.

Anyhow, that is my point-of-view in this matter.

I hope you are having a great day.

Happy New Year! ^^

~Teacher C[이름]

Listening to criticism is not a happy event.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Being criticized is never a happy occasion.
Nobody wants to listen to criticism when one does something.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Nobody wants to be criticized when he/she is doing something.
Most of us wants to listen to sweet words from everybody.

>> Most of us want to listen to sweet words from everybody.
 When I work with my colleagues and I have to make a decision, I said that there is no way that is fulfilled by everyone\'s wish.

>>  When I work with my colleagues and I have to make a decision, I tell them that there is no way that is everyone\'s wish will be fulfilled.
Some decision could not be appropriate but this could be available to someone.

>> Some decisions could not be appropriate but this could be available to someone.
 When we make a decision, the first thing that must be seriously considered is whether it is right or wrong based on the normal reference.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In making a decision, the first thing that must be seriously considered is whether it is right or wrong based on the normal reference.
So, if you do like that, even if there are some criticism to you, you can endure it by other\'s supports.

>> So, if you do it like that, even if there are some criticisms to you, you can endure it by/through other\'s supports.
But listening to criticism is not easy even if the decision is right.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> However, listening to criticism is not that easy even if the decision is right.
If you take over the criticism, you can overcome.

>> If you take over the criticism, you can overcome it.
It is not easy like this works and it is very stressful.

>> It is not easy and it is very stressful.
So, many people follow the old way that have been done by others, to save their emotion from sharp criticisms.

>> So, many people follow the old way that has been done by others, to save their emotion from sharp criticisms.
Everybody says that if we accept other\'s words even if it is not happy, it would be beneficial.

>> Everybody says that if we accept others\' words even if it is not happy/good, it would be beneficial.