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2015-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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I like really really romance and comedy soap operas. However these days I didn't watch the dramas for week days because of my children. Most dramas start at 10:00 pm. When I watch it, my children want to watch it with me. They have to go to bed early so I give up watching TV. However I watch TV on the weekend. I can watch it with a rerun. Most dramas rerun every Sunday and Saturday. When I watch TV, I can't do anything. I start to change my eekend with my children. I go to the library on weenend with them. I will keep it for a long time.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   This is better than ever. Don\'t forget to check your spelling. Let\'s define rerun.Meaning: Broadcast again, as of a filmSentence frame: Somebody ---s something   Teacher Venus^^   I like really really romance and comedy soap operas. >>>I really, really like romance and comedy soap operas. However these days I didn\'t watch the dramas for week days because of my children.>>>However these days I don\'t watch the dramas on weekdays because of my children.   Most dramas start at 10:00 pm. >>>CORRECT When I watch it, my children want to watch it with me. >>>CORRECT They have to go to bed early so I give up watching TV.>>>CORRECT   However I watch TV on the weekend.>>>CORRECT   I can watch it with a rerun.>>>CORRECT   Most dramas rerun every Sunday and Saturday.>>>Some TV channels rerun most dramas every Sunday and Saturday.   When I watch TV, I can\'t do anything.>>>CORRECT   I start to change my eekend with my children.>>>I start to change my weekend with my children.   I go to the library on weenend with them.>>>I go to the library on weekend with them.   I will keep it for a long time. >>>I will continue doing it for a long time.

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