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2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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Is it common to have friendships across generations? => I think the friendship need trust and endless efforts. The more old friends are require to continuous interest. because relationship may be neglected. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these types of friendships. => There are many and variety advantage for friendship. Most of all feeling enjoy and happy during with my friends. And then when there is something difficult to me, i comforted and receive rarious their opinion. It is very helpful and thankful. But sometimes have disadvantage. It is that when i was compared with a friend. It could be something, situation, or appearance, reputation etc... I\'m not jealous but when my friends seemed to be extraordinary i felt envious and wanted to copy like a friend. I\'d like to write more but i really tired Actually I wake up five o\'clock in the morning all this week for go to work... T.T Good night~!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]
Thank you for submitting you Homework
it\'s good to have a lot of friends
Keep up the Good Job

Teacher Brian

Is it common to have friendships across generations?
>>Is it common to have friendships across generations?
I think the friendship need trust and endless efforts.
>>I think friendship needs trust and endless efforts,
The more old friends are require to continuous interest.
>>the older friends that you have requires continuous interest
because relationship may be neglected.
>>because the relationship may be neglected.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of these types of friendships?
>>What are the advantages and disadvantages of these types of friendships?
There are many and variety advantage for friendship.
>>There are varieties of advantage for friendship
Most of all feeling enjoy and happy during with my friends.
>>Most of all enjoying and being happy when I am with my friends
And then when there is something difficult to me,
>>and then when there is something bad about me,
I comforted and receive rarious their opinion.
>>I was comforted and I receive Various opinions
It is very helpful and thankful.
>>which very helpful and I am thankful.
But sometimes have disadvantage.
>>But sometimes there is disadvantage
It is that when i was compared with a friend.
>>as well It is that when I was compared with a friend
It could be something, situation, or appearance, reputation etc...
>>It could be something about a situation, by appearance, reputation and etc.
I\'m not jealous but when my friends seemed to be extraordinary i felt envious and wanted to copy like a friend.
>>I\'m not jealous but when my friends seems to be extraordinary I felt being envious and I wanted to be one of my friend.
I\'d like to write more but i really tired
>>I\'d like to write about more but I am really tired
Actually I wake up five o\'clock in the morning all this week for go to work... T.T
>>Actually I woke up five o\'clock every morning this week to go to work. T.T
Good night~!
>>Good night.

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