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2013-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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EXPERIENCE 1. Name of Co. : Canon Korea Period of Experience : 2012/08 ~ 2012/12 ▷ Job Position & Description • Sales Canon camera to Chinese at Shila Dutie free store • Speak Chinese to explain function of canon camera. • Give customer useful information of shopping voucher. 2. Name of Co. : High Young-Jae academic School. Period of experience : 2010/04~2010/ 12 ▷ Job Position & Description • Teach elementary and junior high school students as an instructor. • Students made 90 point-average. • Taught all subjects except math and English. 3. Name of Co. : Seoul Digital University Period of Experience : 2008/8~2009/12 ▷ Job Position & Description • Work at solving barriers of internet class department. • Using a remote control tool, help student solve computer problem.

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Take note of my corrections Sir! Thank you! -Teacher Chloe EXPERIENCE>>EXPERIENCE: 1. Name of Co. : Canon Korea Period of Experience : 2012/08 ~ 2012/12 >>Correct!▷ Job Position & Description >>Job Position & Description• Sales Canon camera to Chinese at Shila Dutie free store >>Sales Canon camera to Chinese at Shila Dutie free store.• Speak Chinese to explain function of canon camera. >>Speaks Chinese to explain functions of canon cameras.• Give customer useful information of shopping voucher. >>Give customers useful information about shopping voucher.2. Name of Co. : High Young-Jae academic School. Period of experience : 2010/04~2010/ 12 >>Correct!▷ Job Position & Description >>Job Position & Description• Teach elementary and junior high school students as an instructor.>>Teaches elementary and junior high school students as an instructor. • Students made 90 point-average.>>Just delete this information Sir. It is not necessarily needed. • Taught all subjects except math and English.>>Teaches all subjects except math and English.3. Name of Co. : Seoul Digital University Period of Experience : 2008/8~2009/12>>Correct!▷ Job Position & Description >>Job Position & Description• Work at solving barriers of internet class department. >>Solving barriers of internet class department. • Using a remote control tool, help student solve computer problem. >>Using a remote control tool, help students solve computer problems.

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