3-26th Homework

Hello there [이름]!

Thank you very much for writing this wonderful essay.

I was able to reflect a lot.

I was reminded that nothing in this world is permanent and that we should constantly work hard to improve ourselves and our situations.

I came to realize that I should not stay too long inside my comfort zone because if I do, I would stop growing as an individual.

Anyhow, great job for today.

I hope you\'re having a great time.

See you again on Thursday.
Take care.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

Sometimes, memory may hinder people to learn from the past.

>> Sometimes, a memory may hinder people to learn from the past.
Sometimes, memory help people lean from the past.

>> Sometimes, a memory helps people to learn from the past.
Memory has a dual face depending on how to use it.

>> A memory has a dual face depending on how you use it.
In the past, if we had a good memory which was specially successful, we seem to sustain its good point.

>> In the past, if we had a good memory about success, we seem to sustain its good point.
But otherwise, we intend to reject all memories, even if there are some lessons which we can get.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But if it is not a pleasant or victorious one, we intend to reject all memories, even if there are some lessons which we can get.
No changes in this world, the iron seems not to change but it would change as time goes.

>> [Do you mean]: Nothing stays the same in this world. The iron seems not to change but it would change as time goes (by).
We may face many problems to solve as we live in this world.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There\'s a possibility that we would face many problems to solve as we live in this world.
The thought, behavior and human change as time goes.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The thought, behavior and human change as time goes by.
When we face the problems or the events, we often think about it depended on our experiences that we got in the past.

>> When we face problems or events, we often think about it based on our experiences from the past.
And we pretend past to be similar to current and future.

>> And we pretend that the past is similar to the present and the future.
Sometimes, it is true since there is no change.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Sometimes, it is true since nothing has changed.
But, in many cases there are many different things which can not apply to current.

>> But, in many cases there are many different things which can not be applied to the current situation.
At that time, we must find a new solution but we often adapt old thing instead of new thing.

>> At that time, we must find a new solution but we often adapt the old things instead of the new things.
Anyway, the world always changes.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Anyway, everything in this world constantly changes.