3.27 homework

2023-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

학생이 쓴 원문

I think that sociality is important to learn school. Because study any subject can learn internet or book. But sociality is created only by direct confrontation. It is important to win the test. But it is more important to get well friends. Friends can be more closer than family. And if I have troubles, they can fix it.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!
Just keep going! You\'re doing good!
-Hanna ^^
I think that sociality is important to learn school.
>>I think that socialization is important.
Because study any subject can learn internet or book.
>>Because you can study and learn other subjects through internet or book.
But sociality is created only by direct confrontation.
>>But socialization is learned only by interacting with people.
It is important to win the test.
>>It is important to pass the examination,
But it is more important to get well friends.
>>But it is more important to get along with friends.
Friends can be more closer than family.
>>Correct.
And if I have troubles, they can fix it.
>>And if I have problems, they can help me with it.

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