3.27Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning?
Homework
How can you learn from other people? Explain why and how you learned it.
I learned donation and favor from my boss in company. He used to give me envelope containning some money every festive season beforetime. He gave me some money to treat my mother and father for meat.now my parents passed away. I can't forget it and I am still respecting him.I want to resemble him. So I decided that I would give some favor to my junior staff which the same favor,like my boss. I fullfilled my promise for three years.Helping other people makes us feel good,right?
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
HAPPY THURSDAY MR. [이름]!!!
I\'m amazed with what you have shared today. You are absolutely right, helping other people makes us feel good. I hope that you will continue your good deed. Who knows, other people might follow your footsteps as well. Have a great day!
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning?>> Correct!HomeworkHow can you learn from other people? Explain why and how you learned it.I learned donation and favor from my boss in company.
>> I learned how to donate and give favors from my company boss.
He used to give me envelope containning some money every festive season beforetime.
>> He used to give me an envelope with money every festive season.
He gave me some money to treat my mother and father for meat.
>> Correct!
now my parents passed away.
>> My parents passed away already.
I can\'t forget it and I am still respecting him.
>> Correct!
I want to resemble him.
>> Correct!
So I decided that I would give some favor to my junior staff which the same favor,like my boss.
>> So I decided that I would give my junior staff the same favor my boss gave me.
I fullfilled my promise for three years.
>> Correct!
Helping other people makes us feel good,right?>> Correct!Thank you!
>> Correct!
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