3-27th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^__^

Thank you very much for writing in our composition board.

I am really amazed with your opinions in this subject matter.

Nothing could really replace hard work.

The good thing about hard work is that, you enjoy it\'s rewards later in life.

But of course, you have to know where to put your effort or hard work.

Anyhow, that is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you are having a great day.

Take care always. ^^

~Teacher C[이름]

Sometimes, although we don\'t pretend to do something but it happens.

>> Although we don\'t pretend to do something, it happens sometimes.
I think in this world there are many events and these events could not be controlled by us.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think in this world there are many events that we could not control.

Everyone wants to make a decision based on one\'s own thought.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Everyone wants to make a decision based on their own understanding.
It\'s because no one becomes an onlooker in the events being related to him.

>> [Do you mean]: It\'s because no one wants to be an onlooker in the events related to him/her.
The words that I want to say about this topic is just to do hard until you satisfy with yourself.

>> The words that I want to say about this topic is to just work hard until you are satisfied with yourself.
The goal and idea would become a reality through your endeavor.
>> CORRECT!

OR >> The goal and idea would become a reality through your hard work.

There is nothing to be able to get in way that it is easy.

>> [Do you mean]: There is nothing that would get in the way that is easy to solve.

But even if you do your best, the goal and ideal would not become a reality.

>> But even if you do your best, the goal and idea would not become a reality.
It\'s because there are many factors to achieve yours without stopping.

>> It\'s because there are many factors to achieve without stopping.
But the first thing that we have to do for achieving is to do your best, which there is no exception.

>> But the first thing that you have to do to achieve our goal is to do your best, which is not an exception.
We often heard of one\'s success, specially in the business.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We often hear of other\'s success, specially in the field of business.
At the glance, we just think of their success as a simple thing, which we have an error.

>> At a glance, we just think of their success as a simple thing, which is wrong.
They alway do their best and then finally they get a success.

>> They always do their best and then finally they get a success.