3.28 homwork
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Can you tell me about your favorite genre of music? Why do you like it?
The genre of music l listen to depends on what kind of mood i am in. My favorite genre of music is Pop.
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By listening to my favorites, i feel relaxed and excited and then i used to hum a tune.
>> By listening to my favorites, I feel relaxed and excited, and then I even hummed a tune.
1. I sometimes watch these videos again i usually used to enjoy watching when i was young. One of things is Japen\\\'s masterpiece, ‘My Neighbor Totoro. It helps reduce low mood.
>> I sometimes rewatch the videos that I used to enjoy watching when I was young. One such films is Japan\'s masterpiece My Neighbor Totoro. Watching it helps brighten my mood.
2. My music collection is composed of Pop and K-pop. Especially, i have no relish for noisy rock music.
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3. Rasing pets may be hard thing. It is composed of looking after pets and having responsibilty for pets.
>> Raising pets may be a hard thing to do, but it involves looking after a living thing and having responsibility for it.
4. March is passing. The several favorite memories have piled up. Most of all, I consider what i look like after 1 years.
>> March is passing and several of my favorite memories have piled up. Most of all, I\'m considering what I would look like after 1 year.
5. Two of these made me have no appetite. I will try another one.
>> Two of these made me lose my appetite. I will try another one.
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