3-28th Homework

Hello, [이름]! ^_^

I\'m really happy with your essay today.

I think your sentences and opinions are great.

They are carefully constructed in terms of grammar and philosophy! ^^
Good job!

I think most people love to follow the crowd.

They like to follow the opinion of others instead of coming up with their own.

Maybe it\'s because they don\'t want to make a mistake or be blamed for going against the flow.

But I think that is a cowardly action. In addition to that, it cripples a person brain.

It\'s still better to form your own opinions and decisions.

Anyhow, that is my point-of-view in this matter.

I hope you are doing great.

See you again on Tuesday.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

In the modern society, there is no personal opinion, especially in complicated cases.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In the modern world, there is no such thing as personal opinion, especially in complicated cases.
We always want to get all opinions of people.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We always want to get the opinions of all the people around us.
So, the individual opinion or thought is just a part of all.

>> So, the individual opinion or thought is just a part of it all.
Even if it is right, getting the power to achieve its goal is an important procedure in the modern society.

>> Even if it is right, getting the power to achieve a goal is an important procedure in the modern society.
Everybody say like that even if it is tiny, it is valuable for us.

>> Everybody says that even if it is tiny, it is valuable for them.
But they don\'t directly use the personal opinion to make a decision.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But they don\'t directly use the personal opinion when making a decision.
I think they don\'t want to make errors in their processing through gathering more ideas and opinions.

>> [Do you mean]: I think they don\'t want to make errors when gathering more ideas and opinions.
They became anxious about the decision that they have to make alone.

>> They become anxious about the decision that they have to make alone.
So they want to act together in order to reduce the danger.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why they want to act together because they think that the chances of committing a mistake is lesser.
Personal ideas and actions are also important but we don\'t live alone.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Personal ideas and actions are important as well but we don\'t exist alone.
So, we must seriously consider personal ideas but it might not apply to all aspect.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We have to seriously consider personal ideas but it might not apply to all aspect.
I think we don\'t need to put too much value on the ideas or actions of individual people but we don\'t ignore it.

>> I think we don\'t need to put too much value on the ideas or actions of individual people but we should not ignore it either.
There would be something that we could not catch it.

>> There would be something that we could not catch from it.