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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
A few days ago, I joined your the internet service.
I was trying to access my internet connection.
I couldn't connect the internet.
I think the internet has some problems.
So I need your help.
I want to know why it is not working.
Can you help me? and can you tell me the reason?
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
This is better than ever. Don\'t forget \'to\'.
\"Connect to\" : often used with things and devices like computers.
examples:
Your computer is connected to the internet .
The printer is connected to the computer\'s USB port .
Teacher Venus^^
Hello.
>>>CORRECT
A few days ago, I joined your the internet service.
>>>A few days ago, I joined your internet service.
I was trying to access my internet connection.
>>>CORRECT
I couldn\'t connect the internet.
>>>I couldn\'t connect to the internet.
I think the internet has some problems.
>>>CORRECT
So I need your help.
>>>CORRECT
I want to know why it is not working.
>>>CORRECT
Can you help me? and can you tell me the reason?
>>>Can you help me and can you tell me the reason?
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