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2015-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello. A few days ago, I joined your the internet service. I was trying to access my internet connection. I couldn't connect the internet. I think the internet has some problems. So I need your help. I want to know why it is not working. Can you help me? and can you tell me the reason?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   This is better than ever. Don\'t forget \'to\'. \"Connect to\" : often used with things and devices like computers. examples: Your computer is connected to the internet . The printer is connected to the computer\'s USB port .   Teacher Venus^^   Hello. >>>CORRECT A few days ago, I joined your the internet service. >>>A few days ago, I joined your internet service. I was trying to access my internet connection. >>>CORRECT I couldn\'t connect the internet. >>>I couldn\'t connect to the internet. I think the internet has some problems. >>>CORRECT So I need your help. >>>CORRECT I want to know why it is not working. >>>CORRECT Can you help me? and can you tell me the reason? >>>Can you help me and can you tell me the reason?

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