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Yes. It\'s important for me.
Because she fought without any weapon.
Furthermore she lost her farther because of independence movment.
She was turtored from japanese police. But she stick to her convictions about our country independence.
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History helps us understand change and how the society we live in came to be. It records and helps people understand successes and failures. Through these studies people can learn about change and how others are affected by it. It shows patterns of behaviour or events in the past and their outcome which can help us avoid similar outcomes in the future.
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Yes. It\'s important for me.
>> Yes. It\'s important to me.
Or >> Yes. It\'s significant to me.
Because she fought without any weapon.
Because she fought without any weapon.
>> Because she was unarmed during the war.
Furthermore she lost her farther because of independence movment.
Furthermore she lost her farther because of independence movment.
>> She also lost her father as a result of the independence movement.
She was turtored from japanese police.
She was turtored from japanese police.
>> She was tortured by Japanese police officers.
But she stick to her convictions about our country independence.
>> But she stood strong in her support of the sovereignty of the nation.
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