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학생이 쓴 원문
The snow is used to take a picture for upload in the instargram.
The picture used snow has christmas festive mood.
And we are playing snowball fight with my younger brother. but too cold.
강사 첨삭
Thanks, [이름] [이름]!
I believe snow is a magical thing. It acts like an angel, fluttering down from the sky with such grace and elegance and softly lands on the earth. What do you think?
- Kristine ^^
The snow is used to take a picture for upload in the instargram.
>> I take pictures of snow to upload it on the Instagram.
The picture used snow has christmas festive mood.
The picture used snow has christmas festive mood.
>> The picture of snow has a festive christmas mood.
And we are playing snowball fight with my younger brother.
And we are playing snowball fight with my younger brother.
>> In addition, my younger brother and I like playing snowball fight.
but too cold.
>> However, it\'s too cold.
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