3.3 Homework

2014-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good afternoon! Homework Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to suffort your answer. Sometimes, success defends on the one's luck. I believe that a huge rich man is born under a luck. Of course, I do not gainsay about the success of working hard. Unfortunately,I haven't much sense and that luck, so I am not a rich man. But I am happy all my life. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!!! Thank you for sharing your ideas about success and luck. if you have time, kindly go over my corrections. Thank you and enjoy the rest of your day. ~KeLLy~ Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon!>> CORRECT!!!HomeworkDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to suffort your answer.Sometimes, success defends on the one\'s luck. >>Sometimes, success depends on one\'s luck. I believe that a huge rich man is born under a luck. >>I believe that a rich man was born lucky.Of course, I do not gainsay about the success of working hard. >> Of course, I do not doubt the success that a hardworking person can achieve. Unfortunately, I haven\'t much sense and that luck, so I am not a rich man. >> Unfortunately, I don\'t have much luck, that is why I am not a rich man.But I am happy all my life. >> But I am happy with my life.Thank you! >> CORRECT!!!

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