3.3 Homework

2015-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Have you eaten lunch today? I have lunch already. Have a good time with your co-workers. In your opinion what causes over population? Do you think it will become a big problem in the near futher? Why? Over polution is due to an unbalance between the population and ability to support of the population. over population is also caused by a lack of resources, starvation and poverty. To solve this problem, I am sugessting to prevent rapid urbanization, so we need a disperse population policy. We need to enhance our ability to support through the expansion of food and economic development. Anyway I think it will become a big problem in the future. Wisdom and practice are needed. Thank you! i think that today's subject is so difficult for me. I am ashamed about my composition.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! I am happy because you still answered today\'s homework even if it\'s difficult for you. You accepted my challenge for you! Good job!^^. I hope that you will never get tired answering the homework that I give you everyday. You keep on improving each day. Keep it up! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Have you eaten lunch today? >> Correct. I have lunch already. >> I had lunch already. Have a good time with your co-workers.>> Correct.In your opinion what causes over population? Do you think it will become a big problem in the near futher? Why?Over polution is due to an unbalance between the population and ability to support of the population. >> Over polution is due to an unbalance population and the inability to support people. over population is also caused by a lack of resources, starvation and poverty. >> Over population is also caused by lack of resources, starvation and poverty. To solve this problem, I am sugessting to prevent rapid urbanization, so we need a disperse population policy. >> To solve this problem, I suggest the prevention of rapid urbanization, so we need a dispersed population policy. We need to enhance our ability to support through the expansion of food and economic development. >> We need to enhance our ability to support our family through the expansion of food and economic development. Anyway I think it will become a big problem in the future. >> Correct. Wisdom and practice are needed.>> We don\'t only need wisdom to solve this problem but we need to act out to prevent overpopulation. Thank you! i think that today\'s subject is so difficult for me. >> Correct.  I am ashamed about my composition. >> Correct.

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