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In Korea, a common saying goes \"couples should know each other for four seasons before they get married\".
Four seasons mean a year because Korea has four seasons.
At first, you\'ll feel good about the person\'s background, such as appearance or job.
But, we can see internal things after getting along with each other.
Every people have both advantages and disadvantage or weakness.
At the beginning of couples, we can not notice weakness.
Everything looks good and the partner seems like the best mate in my life.
We need time to talk about many things such as value or lifestyle and to fight and argue.
Those situations make us think future and understand or give up with each other.
However, I think that personality is also very important to live together as a family.
Some of my friends got married early after they met.
And they are living very well.
The biggest factor of their happy life is their flexible personality.
I think that control of mind also a very important skill to live happily.
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In Korea, a common saying goes \"couples should know each other for four seasons before they get married\".
>> correct
Four seasons means a year because Korea has four seasons.
Four seasons means a year because Korea has four seasons.
>> correct
At first, you\'ll feel good about the person\'s background, such as appearance or job.
At first, you\'ll feel good about the person\'s background, such as appearance or job.
>> At first, you consider the person\'s outward facets.
But, we can see internal things after getting along with each other.
But, we can see internal things after getting along with each other.
>> But we can see deeper things when we spend more time together.
Every people have both advantages and disadvantage or weakness.
Every people have both advantages and disadvantage or weakness.
>> Every person has their strong points and weak points.
At the beginning of couples, we can not notice weakness.
At the beginning of couples, we can not notice weakness.
>> At the beginning of the relationship, we don\'t notice the weaknesses.
Everything looks good and the partner seems like the best mate in my life.
Everything looks good and the partner seems like the best mate in my life.
>> correct
We need time to talk about many things such as value or lifestyle and to fight and argue.
We need time to talk about many things such as value or lifestyle and to fight and argue.
>> We need to talk and sometimes argue about many things such as lifestyle and others.
Those situations make us think future and understand or give up with each other.
However, I think that personality is also very important to live together as a family.
Those situations make us think future and understand or give up with each other.
However, I think that personality is also very important to live together as a family.
>> correct
Some of my friends got married early after they met.
Some of my friends got married early after they met.
>> correct
And they are living very well.
And they are living very well.
>> correct
The biggest factor of their happy life is their flexible personality.
The biggest factor of their happy life is their flexible personality.
>> correct
I think that control of mind is also a very important skill to live happily.
I think that control of mind is also a very important skill to live happily.
>> correct
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