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When I was young, I liked listening to music on TV and Redio.
Also my friends and I talked about music and singers.
However, I can't listen to music.
I don't watch TV and I don't listen to Redio.
I sometimes listen to music at lunch time.
My cellphone has MP3 function so I can listen to music.
I like popular Korean music I don't know POP music.
Ballad is my favorite type of music.
These days, my daughter likes listening to music so I listen to music with her.
We can talk about our favorite music.
She uses her callphone when she listens to music like me.
I think the world will be coming as comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are getting better everyday. Some reminders:\'listen to the radio\' is more common
example: I don\'t watch TV and I don\'t listen to the radio.
Teacher Venus^^
When I was young, I liked listening to music on TV and Redio.
>>>When I was young, I liked listening to music on TV and the radio.
Also my friends and I talked about music and singers.
>>>CORRECT
However, I can\'t listen to music.
>>>CORRECT
I don\'t watch TV and I don\'t listen to Redio.>>>I don\'t watch TV and I don\'t listen to the radio.
I sometimes listen to music at lunch time.>>>CORRECT
My cellphone has MP3 function so I can listen to music.>>>CORRECT
I like popular Korean music I don\'t know POP music.>>>I like popular Korean music. I don\'t know pop music.
Ballad is my favorite type of music.>>>CORRECT
These days, my daughter likes listening to music so I listen to music with her.>>>CORRECT
We can talk about our favorite music.>>>CORRECT
She uses her callphone when she listens to music like me.>>>CORRECT
I think the world will be coming as comfortable.
>>>I think the world will be more comfortable.
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