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2015-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was young, I liked listening to music on TV and Redio. Also my friends and I talked about music and singers. However, I can't listen to music. I don't watch TV and I don't listen to Redio. I sometimes listen to music at lunch time. My cellphone has MP3 function so I can listen to music. I like popular Korean music I don't know POP music. Ballad is my favorite type of music. These days, my daughter likes listening to music so I listen to music with her. We can talk about our favorite music. She uses her callphone when she listens to music like me. I think the world will be coming as comfortable.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You are getting better everyday. Some reminders:\'listen to the radio\' is more common example: I don\'t watch TV and I don\'t listen to the radio.   Teacher Venus^^   When I was young, I liked listening to music on TV and Redio. >>>When I was young, I liked listening to music on TV and the radio. Also my friends and I talked about music and singers. >>>CORRECT However, I can\'t listen to music. >>>CORRECT I don\'t watch TV and I don\'t listen to Redio.>>>I don\'t watch TV and I don\'t listen to the radio.   I sometimes listen to music at lunch time.>>>CORRECT   My cellphone has MP3 function so I can listen to music.>>>CORRECT   I like popular Korean music I don\'t know POP music.>>>I like popular Korean music. I don\'t know pop music.   Ballad is my favorite type of music.>>>CORRECT   These days, my daughter likes listening to music so I listen to music with her.>>>CORRECT   We can talk about our favorite music.>>>CORRECT   She uses her callphone when she listens to music like me.>>>CORRECT   I think the world will be coming as comfortable. >>>I think the world will be more comfortable.

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