3-30th Homework

2017-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

I think in the world there is no same thing and no same weight. When we appreciate something, at first we think about the need for me. If it is useful for me, it is good and we consider more weight about it. If it is useless for me, we don't think about it. Also, when we decide to do something, we ask someone an advice. At that time, we listen to one's advice and we decide to do something whether it is good for me or not. In this processing, we may place more weight on the proper opinion. So, I don't think I have to weigh all opinions. Each opinion has a reason that is based on each background. Our environments differ from each other, so each opinion could not be adapt straightforwardly. But there is one thing that we have to think importantly. That is the ignore about other's advices and opinions. I think if we don't ignore it, we could do best. But I also know that it is not easy to consider above like. Sometimes we succeed or fail, and then we have to think about the ignore.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! ^_^

How\'s your day going so far?

Thank you very much for once again writing in our composition board.

I missed your essay. ^_^

I think not all opinions are valuable.

That\'s why we have to be careful when asking for an advice because not all advices are correct.

Some of them are useful and others are useless.

It\'s just a matter of being critical and wise.

Anyhow, that is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you are having a great day at work.

See you again on Thursday.

Take care.

~Teacher C[이름] ^_^

I think in the world there is no same thing and no same weight.

>> I think in the world, nothing is the same and of the same weight.
When we appreciate something, at first we think about the need for me.

>> [Do you mean]: When we appreciate something, we think first if it\'s going to be beneficial for us or not. 

If it is useful for me, it is good and we consider more weight about it.

>> If it is useful and good for us, we consider and put more weight to it.
If it is useless for me, we don\'t think about it.

>> If it is useless for us, we don\'t think about it.
Also, when we decide to do something, we ask someone an advice.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In addition to that, when we are deciding to do something, we ask someone for an advice.
At that time, we listen to one\'s advice and we decide to do something whether it is good for me or not.

>> At that time, we listen to one\'s advice and we decide whether it is good for us or not.
In this processing, we may place more weight on the proper opinion.

>> In this process, we may place more weight on the proper opinion.
So, I don\'t think I have to weigh all opinions.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why I don\'t think I have to weigh all opinions.
Each opinion has a reason that is based on each background.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Every opinion has a reason which is based on every background.
Our environments differ from each other, so each opinion could not be adapt straightforwardly.

>> Our environments differ from each other, so each opinion could not be adopted straightforwardly.
But there is one thing that we have to think importantly.

>> But there is one important thing that we have to think about.
That is the ignore about other\'s advices and opinions.

>> That is, ignoring other\'s advices and opinions.
I think if we don\'t ignore it, we could do best.

>> [Do you mean]: I think if we don\'t ignore it, we could perform well.
But I also know that it is not easy to consider above like.

>> But I also know that it is not easy to consider what I mentioned above.
Sometimes we succeed or fail, and then we have to think about the ignore.

>> Sometimes we succeed or fail, and then we have to think about ignoring things. 

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