3.31 Homework

2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good morning. Finally, It is the last day of this month. I feel the time is very fast. Homework What is the best way to save money? I have had some experiences of stock investments. Once, I got a fairly good return my stock investments. but I finally lost some money in the stock market. I think, the best way to save money is steady saving.It is really better to save a money like ants. I would like to recommend this way to others. Thank you!

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Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your ideas on how to save money the right way. Especially these days, we really have to be wise when saving our money. Have a great day! ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning. Finally, It is the last day of this month. >> Correct. I feel the time is very fast.>> I feel that time flies very fast.HomeworkWhat is the best way to save money?I have had some experiences of stock investments. >> I had some bad experience regarding stock investments. Once, I got a fairly good return my stock investments. >> Once, I got a fairly good return from my investments. but I finally lost some money in the stock market. >> But in the end, I lost some money in the stock market. I think, the best way to save money is steady saving. >> I think, the best way to save money is through steady saving. It is really better to save a money like ants. >> It is really better to save money like ants.I would like to recommend this way to others.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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