3.31 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning. Finally, It is the last day of this month. I feel the time is very fast.
Homework
What is the best way to save money?
I have had some experiences of stock investments. Once, I got a fairly good return my stock investments. but I finally lost some money in the stock market. I think, the best way to save money is steady saving.It is really better to save a money like ants.
I would like to recommend this way to others.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your ideas on how to save money the right way. Especially these days, we really have to be wise when saving our money. Have a great day!
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning. Finally, It is the last day of this month.
>> Correct.
I feel the time is very fast.>> I feel that time flies very fast.HomeworkWhat is the best way to save money?I have had some experiences of stock investments.
>> I had some bad experience regarding stock investments.
Once, I got a fairly good return my stock investments.
>> Once, I got a fairly good return from my investments.
but I finally lost some money in the stock market.
>> But in the end, I lost some money in the stock market.
I think, the best way to save money is steady saving.
>> I think, the best way to save money is through steady saving.
It is really better to save a money like ants.
>> It is really better to save money like ants.I would like to recommend this way to others.>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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