3.31 Homework

2015-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! It's raining in Changwon, and today is the last day of this month. Thank you for your all efforts. What can poetry teach us about life? I think that the title of today's essay is so difficult for me. We can live abundantly with poetry. On second thought, it's a long time that I read poetry. I think that I feel lacking for emotion. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for trying your best in answering the essay question. Thank you for your patience as well as well. I hope that this coming month, you will give your best again in studying English.^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! It\'s raining in Changwon, and today is the last day of this month. Thank you for your all efforts.>> Correct.What can poetry teach us about life?I think that the title of today\'s essay is so difficult for me. >> I think that the essay question for today is so difficult for me. We can live abundantly with poetry. >> Correct.On second thought, it\'s a long time that I read poetry. >> I realized that I haven\'t read a poem for a long time. I think that I feel lacking for emotion.>> I think I am not emotional.Thank you! >> Correct.

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