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I think that even if people would not maintain their positivism, they will become familiar and adapt to that.
And people will find a proper way to survive and live.
It will change our lifestyle a lot, even to the industrial field.
At the beginning of this virus period, many people were in a panic and scared of abnormal life, at least in Korea.
But, wearing a mask became natural behavior like wearing cloth.
Human is a being adaptation.
Everyone is struggling to overcome this situation, at the same time, to adapt to this situation too.
Although there are many complaints and fears, we are establishing a new lifestyle now.
Even if coronavirus will be disappeared someday, we can\'t back to the same life before the virus.
Everything is already changed and we should admit it.
However, we don\'t need to disappoint a lot, because we will find a new world and life and will adopt it.
Since we can\'t give up our lives, we have to survive mentally and physically.
It is a reason to maintain positivism.
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Hi [이름],
This is once again an insightful response to the question I gave you:) Thanks for the response.
-Rachel
I think that even if people would not maintain their positivism, they will become familiar and adapt to that. And people will find a proper way to survive and live.
>> correct (amazing sentences)
It will change our lifestyle a lot, even to the industrial field.
>> correct (amazing sentences)
It will change our lifestyle a lot, even to the industrial field.
>> correct
At the beginning of this virus period, many people were in a panic and scared of abnormal life, at least in Korea.
At the beginning of this virus period, many people were in a panic and scared of abnormal life, at least in Korea.
>> At the beginning of this pandemic, many people were in panic and scared of living an abnormal life, at least in Korea.
But, wearing a mask became natural behavior like wearing cloth.
But, wearing a mask became natural behavior like wearing cloth.
>> But wearing a mask became a natural behavior like wearing clothes.
Human is a being adaptation.
Human is a being adaptation.
>> Humanity is being able to adapt.
>> Humanity is about adaptation.
Everyone is struggling to overcome this situation, at the same time, to adapt to this situation too.
Everyone is struggling to overcome this situation, at the same time, to adapt to this situation too.
>> correct
Although there are many complaints and fears, we are establishing a new lifestyle now.
Although there are many complaints and fears, we are establishing a new lifestyle now.
>> correct
Even if corona virus will be disappeared someday, we can\'t back to the same life before the virus.
Even if corona virus will be disappeared someday, we can\'t back to the same life before the virus.
>> Even if the corona virus will disappear someday, we can\'t go back to the same life before the virus.
>> Even if the corona virus will be eradicated someday, we can\'t back to the same life before the virus.
Everything is already changed and we should admit it.
Everything is already changed and we should admit it.
>> correct
However, we don\'t need to disappoint a lot, because we will find a new world and life and will adopt it.
However, we don\'t need to disappoint a lot, because we will find a new world and life and will adopt it.
>> However, we don\'t need to be disappointed a lot, because we will find a new world and life and will adopt it.
Since we can\'t give up our lives, we have to survive mentally and physically. It is a reason to maintain positivism.
Since we can\'t give up our lives, we have to survive mentally and physically. It is a reason to maintain positivism.
>> correct
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