3-31th Homework

Hi there [이름]! ^_^

Thank you very much for taking the time to write in our composition board even if you\'re not feeling well.

I really appreciate your effort.

I think the pieces of advice we get from others are important or valuable but we also need to be careful with the kinds of advice that we take.

It\'s because not all of them are correct.

And when it comes to decision-making, we have to be really critical.

Anyhow, that is just my opinion.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow. ^_^

Get well soon.

~Teacher C[이름]

In my case, the advice is good or bad whether I have an attitude to be taken some advice or not.

>> [Do you mean]: In my case, I decide whether to take an advice or not. 

If I really want to get the advice from someone, I will seriously listen to other\'s talk.

>> If I really want to get the advice from someone, I will seriously listen to him or her.
But sometimes, even if it is a very good advice, I will not take it if I don\'t have a mindset to take it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But sometimes, even if it is a very good advice, I will not take it if I don\'t feel like doing it.
Even if I listen or hear, I would have already another plan.

>> Even if I listen or hear, I would already have another plan.
So, I think the advice is important when it is given.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think the advice is important when it is given.
On the other thought, somebody wants to give an advice to someone.

>> On a second thought, somebody wants to give an advice to someone.

If someone always refuses the advice, he may lose the opportunity that other gives the advice.

>> If someone always refuses the advice, he may lose the opportunity that others give. 

So, even if you don\'t use the advice that someone gives to me, you just have to listen to other\'s talk at least.

>> So, even if you don\'t need the advice that someone gives to you, you just have to listen to them at least.
I think it is a best way to have a good relationship with others.

>> I think it is the best way to have a good relationship with others.
Of course, we do not want to do it, it\'s OK.

>> Of course, if we do not want to do it, it\'s okay.
We don\'t live alone, so we have a relationship each other.

>> We don\'t live alone and we need to maintain a relationship with each other.
I think the advices from others are a result of the relationship.

>> I think the pieces of advice we get from others is a result of the relationship.
If they ignore or don\'t have a interest about you, they would not advice to you.

>> If they ignore you or don\'t have an interest in you, they would not advice you.