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2013-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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Hi, today it's rain but i'm happy. beacuse nowdays it is the heighy of summer, so hot. Today is cool. lololololol^^ 1. __________________ he always did well on his English tests, his parents were not surprised that he got an A. Since 2. You should keep the milk in the refrigerator, __________________ it doesn't go bad. so that 3. __________________ he thinks he's smart, he isn't. Although 4. You should say goodbye to your brother ________________ you leave for Europe. before 5. ________________ my father has high blood pressure, he has to watch what he eats. Since

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon^^ It\'s good that you\'re very happy even if it rained. Anyway, you got a perfect score for today\'s homework. Please review the corrections that I\'ve given below. Enjoy the evening ahead. I\'ll see you tomorrow. __ T. JanE ^^ __  Hi, >>>Correct!today it\'s rain but i\'m happy. >>>It\'s raining today but I\'m still happy. beacuse nowdays it is the heighy of summer, so hot. >>>Because nowadays, it is the height of summer, so it\'s hot.Today is cool. lololololol^^>>>Correct! 1. __________________ he always did well on his English tests, his parents were not surprised that he got an A.Since>>>Correct! 2. You should keep the milk in the refrigerator, __________________ it doesn\'t go bad.so that>>>Correct! 3. __________________ he thinks he\'s smart, he isn\'t.Although>>>Correct! 4. You should say goodbye to your brother ________________ you leave for Europe.before>>>Correct! 5. ________________ my father has high blood pressure, he has to watch what he eats.Since >>>Correct!

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