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These days I don't read some books but I read some books last years. I like a novel entitled "The Witches of Pendle" which is an England book. This book's story is about Witches. Jennet is a main character her family is very poor and dirty. Many neighbors don't like them. So her tell them my mother, grandmother and all family are witches but it is lie. However neighbors believe it. So her family die because of lie. Jennet is very sad but she can live in warm house because of her lie However she die because she is witches' daughter. When I read this book I didn't know many vocabulary so I needed a lot of time to read it.

Hello [이름]!   Nice try! You have to avoid run-on sentences. If you put two sentences (or independent clauses) together without a sufficient amount of signals (commas, semicolons, or connecting words), you have created a run-on.  Write two independent clauses as separate sentences using periods. example:Jennet is the main character. Her family is very poor and dirty.   Teacher Venus^^   These days I don\'t read some books but I read some books last years. >>>These days I don\'t read some books but I read some books last year. I like a novel entitled \"The Witches of Pendle\" which is an England book. >>>CORRECT This book\'s story is about Witches. >>>This book  is about witches. Jennet is a main character her family is very poor and dirty. >>>Jennet is the main character. Her family is very poor and dirty. Many neighbors don\'t like them. >>>CORRECT So her tell them my mother, grandmother and all family are witches but it is lie. >>>So she told them her mother, grandmother and all family members are witches but it is a lie. However neighbors believe it. >>>However her neighbors believed it. So her family die because of lie. >>>So her family died because of her lie. Jennet is very sad but she can live in warm house because of her lie >>>Jennet is very sad but she can live in a warm house because of her lie. However she die because she is witches\' daughter. >>>However she died because she is a witch\'s daughter.When I read this book I didn\'t know many vocabulary so I needed a lot of time to read it. >>>When I read this book I didn\'t know many vocabulary words so I needed a lot of time to read it.