3-33th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

How\'s your day going so far?

Thank you for doing an excellent job with your homework.

You were able to make nice and long sentences today.

Good job! ^_^

Anyway, I do agree that achieving the organization\'s goal is important but achieving your individual goal is far more important.

It\'s because it your personal goal is not met or achieved, you would soon doubt the organization\'s goal and resent it.

That\'s my opinion in this matter.

I hope  you have a great day.
Happy New Year in advance~

See you next Tuesday. ^_^

~Teacher C[이름]

I think it is very confused for me.

>> I think it is very confusing for me.
Sometimes, the most successful thing in the groups is to achieve its goal.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Sometimes, the most successful thing in the groups is achieving its goal.
Sometimes, the goal of the organization may be not related to the personal goal.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are times when the goal of the organization may be not related to the personal goal.
So, many members are often confused.

>> That\'s why many members are often confused.
First of all, we live in the organization together and we have to pursue its goal.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> First of all, we are all part of the organization and we have to pursue its goal.
If so not, the organization would not survive in their society.

>> If not, the organization would not survive in the society.
In this point, I have a question about the relationship between person and group.

>> In this point, I have a question about the relationship between the person and the group.
The administrator often say like that, \"we have to sacrifice for the group in order to achieve each goal.\"

>> The administrator often says (that), \"we have to sacrifice for the group in order to achieve each goal.\"
He seems to say like that the goal of the group is same with personal goal.

>> He seems to say that the goal of the group is the same with the personal goal of each member.
Of course, I partially agree.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I somewhat agree to it.
But I don\'t want that I have to sacrifice for the group or company.

>> But I don\'t want to sacrifice for the group or company.
I just want to do my best in my situation but I don\'t want to sacrifice myself for the group.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I only want to give my best in every situation but I don\'t want to sacrifice myself for the group.
I just want to differentiate from personal and group.

>> I just want to differentiate my personal goal from the group goal.
Someone says that even if you leave the office and you have a great role in the office, it will keep going well.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Some people say that even if you leave the office and you have a great role in the office, it will keep going well.