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My favorite author is Joan K. Rowling.
A few years ago, I watched a movie entitled "Harry Potter And The Sorcerer's Stone"
After watching movie, I thought that this movie was very amazing because of imagination.
So I really wondered this movie's author.
I read her information on the internet.
I respect her imagination and she didn't give up her life despite poor.
I still don't read the novel Harry Potter.
I want to read it in English.
So I have to study an English very hard.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are really diligent. Some reminders:
1. Make use of prepositions correctly. A preposition is used to link noun, pronouns and phrases to other words in a sentence. The word or phrase that the preposition introduces is called the object of the preposition.
example: wondered about
2. profile- A biographical account presenting the subject\'s most noteworthy characteristics and achievements.
Teacher Venus^^
My favorite author is Joan K. Rowling.
>>>CORRECT
A few years ago, I watched a movie entitled \"Harry Potter And The Sorcerer\'s Stone\"
>>>A few years ago, I watched a movie entitled \"Harry Potter And The Sorcerer\'s Stone\".
After watching movie, I thought that this movie was very amazing because of imagination.
>>>After watching the movie, I thought that this movie was very amazing because of her imagination.
So I really wondered this movie\'s author.
>>>So I really wondered about this movie\'s author.
I read her information on the internet.
>>>I read her profile on the internet.
I respect her imagination and she didn\'t give up her life despite poor.
>>>I respect her imagination and she didn\'t give up her life despite her poverty.
I still don\'t read the novel Harry Potter.
>>>I still haven\'t read the novel Harry Potter.
I want to read it in English.
>>>CORRECT
So I have to study an English very hard.
>>>So I have to study English very hard.
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