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2015-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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My favorite author is Joan K. Rowling. A few years ago, I watched a movie entitled "Harry Potter And The Sorcerer's Stone" After watching movie, I thought that this movie was very amazing because of imagination. So I really wondered this movie's author. I read her information on the internet. I respect her imagination and she didn't give up her life despite poor. I still don't read the novel Harry Potter. I want to read it in English. So I have to study an English very hard.

강사 첨삭

 Hello [이름]!   You are really diligent. Some reminders: 1. Make use of prepositions correctly. A preposition is used to link noun, pronouns and phrases to other words in a sentence. The word or phrase that the preposition introduces is called the object of the preposition. example: wondered about 2. profile-  A biographical account presenting the subject\'s most noteworthy characteristics and achievements.   Teacher Venus^^   My favorite author is Joan K. Rowling. >>>CORRECT A few years ago, I watched a movie entitled \"Harry Potter And The Sorcerer\'s Stone\" >>>A few years ago, I watched a movie entitled \"Harry Potter And The Sorcerer\'s Stone\". After watching movie, I thought that this movie was very amazing because of imagination. >>>After watching the movie, I thought that this movie was very amazing because of her imagination. So I really wondered this movie\'s author. >>>So I really wondered about this movie\'s author. I read her information on the internet. >>>I read her profile on the internet. I respect her imagination and she didn\'t give up her life despite poor. >>>I respect her imagination and she didn\'t give up her life despite her poverty. I still don\'t read the novel Harry Potter. >>>I still haven\'t read the novel Harry Potter. I want to read it in English. >>>CORRECT So I have to study an English very hard. >>>So I have to study English very hard.

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