3-34th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

Thank you for taking the time to answer our homework and write a very nice essay.

You did an excellent job today. Congratulations!

Keep doing a great job! :)

In my opinion, success is a very bad teacher because it teaches you nothing.

I think people learn more when they fail or when they lose because it gives them the chance to assess everything from the beginning and evaluate

what they should and should not have done.

Anyhow, that is my point-of-view.

I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you on Thursday. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]

We often misunderstand something, especially when we make a plan or achieve our own goals.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We usually misunderstand something, especially when we are coming up with a plan or when we try to achieve our own goals.
It is about the evaluation of our ability.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s all about our evaluation of our own capabilities.
When we do something to achieve our own goals, the most important thing is to believe ourselves.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When we do something to achieve our own goals, the most important thing is to believe in ourselves.

OR >> When we do something to achieve our own goals, the most important thing is to believe that we can do it. 

Even if the plan is perfect, if we don\'t trust ourselves, it would become useless.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Although the plan is flawless, if we don\'t trust ourselves, it would become useless.
I think there is another element for achieving our own goals, which is to take a support from others.

>> I think there is another element for achieving our own goals, which is to take support from others.
I think the plan is just a plan even if it is perfect.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think the plan is nothing but a plan even if it is flawless.
It\'s because the plan is not executed by itself but human have to do it.

>> It\'s because the plan is not executed by itself but humans/people have to do it.
If we see this point of view, the help or advice from others is important.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If we are going to consider this point of view, the help or advice from others is essential.
In addition, nowadays, many things are connected to others together.

>> In addition, nowadays, many things are connected with each other.
So, there are many problems to be occurred in doing it.

>> So, there are many problems that would occur in doing it.
It would be not simple, and it would need a help to solve it even if we trust us.

>> It would not be simple, and it would require help to solve it even if we trust (in) ourselves.
Now, I know that even if I don\'t know, it is not shy.

>> Now, I know that even if I don\'t know everything, I should not be shy.
If I don\'t know, I have to learn it and then it\'s okay.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If I don\'t know the answer/solution, I have to learn it and then everything will be okay.
We could never know about all things.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s impossible to know everything.