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2015-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Good evening. I need some flowers for my girlfrend. I will propose my girlfriend to marry me tonight. So, can you help me? What kind of flowers for her? Can you choose flowers for me? Oh, I want to send message to her so can I put my message in flowers? I need some relax for myself. Can I enjoy flowers in a garden? Please, keep your fingers crossed!

강사 첨삭

 Hello [이름]!   I like it that you write creatively. Some reminders: [no object]: Make an offer of marriage to someone: I have already proposed to Sarah. [with object]\" One girl proposed marrigae to him on the spot.   Teacher Venus^^   Good evening. >>>CORRECT I need some flowers for my girlfrend. >>>CORRECT I will propose my girlfriend to marry me tonight. >>>I will propose to my girlfriend tonight. So, can you help me? >>>CORRECT What kind of flowers for her? >>>What kind of flowers are good for her? Can you choose flowers for me? >>>Can you choose the flowers for me? Oh, I want to send message to her so can I put my message in flowers?>>>Oh, I want to send message to her so can I add an enclosure card?   I need some relax for myself. >>>I need to relax. Can I enjoy flowers in a garden? >>>CORRECT Please, keep your fingers crossed! >>>CORRECT

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