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학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening.
I need some flowers for my girlfrend.
I will propose my girlfriend to marry me tonight.
So, can you help me?
What kind of flowers for her?
Can you choose flowers for me?
Oh, I want to send message to her so can I put my message in flowers?
I need some relax for myself.
Can I enjoy flowers in a garden?
Please, keep your fingers crossed!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I like it that you write creatively. Some reminders:
[no object]: Make an offer of marriage to someone: I have already proposed to Sarah.
[with object]\" One girl proposed marrigae to him on the spot.
Teacher Venus^^
Good evening.
>>>CORRECT
I need some flowers for my girlfrend.
>>>CORRECT
I will propose my girlfriend to marry me tonight.
>>>I will propose to my girlfriend tonight.
So, can you help me?
>>>CORRECT
What kind of flowers for her?
>>>What kind of flowers are good for her?
Can you choose flowers for me?
>>>Can you choose the flowers for me?
Oh, I want to send message to her so can I put my message in flowers?>>>Oh, I want to send message to her so can I add an enclosure card?
I need some relax for myself.
>>>I need to relax.
Can I enjoy flowers in a garden?
>>>CORRECT
Please, keep your fingers crossed!
>>>CORRECT
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