3-35th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^
How\'s your day?

Thank you for writing this wonderful essay.

I think, before working with a group and relying on other people, we should first learn how to be independent.

Team work is important but self-sufficiency is more relevant especially in this day and age.

Anyhow, that is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you\'re having a great day at work.

See you again tomorrow.
Take care. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름] :)

Sometimes, we could not strictly decide something even if it needs to me immediately.

>> Sometimes, we could not strictly decide on/about something even if it needs to be done immediately.
 It\'s because there are a lot of relationships between me and others.

>>  CORRECT!

OR >> It is because I am connected with other people.
Sometimes, we want to neglect the relationship when we make a decision.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are times when we want to set aside the relationship when we make a decision.
However, we know that after deciding we end up facing a lot of debates.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But after making a decision, we are aware that we would face a lot of debates.
So, even if we try to neglect it we could not do that.

>> So, even if we try to neglect it, we could not do that.
Carrying out the task not depend on others is very important, which it is related with our ability to be able to work alone.

>> Carrying out the task without depending on others is very important because it is related with our ability to be able to work alone.
There are a lot of problem to be related with other\'s desire and other\'s want.

>> There are a lot of problems related with other\'s desire and other\'s want.
But we have to do it alone, sometimes.

>> But we have to do it alone sometimes.

OR >> But sometimes we have to do it alone sometimes.

And also, we have to do it together because we don\'t live alone.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In addition to that, we have to do it together because we don\'t live alone.
The modern society is very complex and there are a lot of needs.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The modern society is very complicated and has a lot of needs.
So, my work is not only my problem but it is also all of us.

>> So, my work is not only my problem but it is also the problem of everybody.
My decision affects another or everything and others affects to me to do something.

>> My decision affects others or everyone and others also affect me in the same way. 

Even if we escape from this situation, we could not do that.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Even if we escape from this situation, it is impossible to always do it.

Since we are humans who live together in the society.

>> This is because we are humans who live together in the society.