3-36th Homework

Hello, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you very much for sharing your opinion in this matter.

I think the education system nowadays puts too much pressure on students.

To be honest, I think schools are trying to manufacture robots or machines that are designed to do something without much feelings or emotions.

Everything is so mechanical and everyone has to compete with each other.

I think true learning cannot truly take place in that form of environment.

Anyhow, that is how I see the present education system.

I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again next week.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

In the educational system, the most important thing is to improve people\'s knowledge in order to solve their problem which they may face in their life.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The most important thing in the educational system is to improve people\'s knowledge in order to solve their problem which they may face in their life.
But the education is executed in the common place where everybody can be there together.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But the education is executed in a common place where everybody can learn together.

So, someone have a great ability to learn something but someone have not.

>> Someone have a great ability to learn something but some don\'t. 

It\'s a gap in the group.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That is the gap in the group.
And we pretend to divide into different groups under a pretext.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We also pretend to divide into different groups under a pretext.
That is an effective education.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That form of education is effective.
In this processing, everybody has unhappily to discover one\'s own knowledge to others.

>> [Do you mean]: In this process, everybody unhappily discovers that others have greater knowledge than them.
There will be a competition to cover or to improve one\'s own knowledge.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> A competition will take place to cover or to improve one\'s own knowledge.
So, it would be operated as a pressure.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> So, it would turn out as a pressure to everyone.
I think the pressure needs to improve or to encourage the ability.

>> I think the pressure needs to improve or to be used to encourage others to improve their ability.
But in somewhere like Korea, Japan, it became the society problem, for example, suicide, violence.

>> But in some nations like Korea and Japan, it has became a societal problem like suicide and violence.
In this society, everybody is imposed to know about something much more than other friends.

>> In this society, everybody is imposed to know about something much more than their other friends.
I want to know the method that everybody become happy as learning the knowledge.

>> I want to know the method that everybody uses to become happy when learning. 

If so, nobody is unhappy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If so, nobody will be unhappy.