3-37th Homework

Hello there [이름]!

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I think following the crowd is not a very good idea because our skill in decision-making won\'t improve.

Rather than following the crowd, I think it is better to evaluate things on your own and weigh the pros and cons of the situation.

When you are done doing it, I think that\'s the only time that you should decide whether you should follow the crowd or not.

Blindly following the crowd is dangerous.

Anyhow, that is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you\'re having a great day.

See you again on Thursday. :)

~Teacher C[이름]

In many cases, there are many good options to choose from.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In most cases, we are always presented with a lot of good options.
Or there are many bad options not choose from.

>> There are many bad options not choose from as well.
In my life, we did try to divide into two things, a good or bad.

>> [Do you mean]: In my life, I\'ve tried to divide things into good things or bad things.

However, sometimes we did try to divide into a right or wrong.

>> Sometimes, we also try to divide things from right or wrong.
In my experiences, when we tried to classify into such a right or wrong we would face a fight.

>> In my experiences, when we tried to classify things from right or wrong we faced some fights.
It\'s very different to say that it is wrong and it is bad.

>> [Do you mean]: Things are very different when you say that it is wrong and it is bad.
The bad is just not for me but the wrong is not for all.

>> [Do you mean]: Bad things and wrong things are not just for me but not for everybody as well.
I think there is no wrong fully.

>> I think nothing is fully wrong.
We want to choose the best one among things that we can choose from.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We want to pick the best one among the options that we have.
Sometimes, many people choose same things.

>> Sometimes, many people choose the same things.
And many others pretend to choose it since many people chose it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> And many others choose to follow the crowd simply because the majority has chosen it.
There would be some error when we do like that.

>> There would be some errors when we do things like that.
Other\'s choice is just for them but not for me.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Other\'s choice might be good for them but it\'s not for me. 

So, even if it is best one for everybody, if it is not good for me, you have to choose another bravely.

>> So, even if it is the best one for everybody, if it is not good for you, then choose another bravely.
I know it is also not easy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I know it is not a simple matter.

When we choose another that it is different from others, we feel nervous.

>> When we choose something that it is different from others, we feel nervous. 
That\'s why we are human who lives together.

>> We are humans who live together.