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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
I am calling you because I think you have something problem.
I am using your internet connection every month.
Also I always paid my bill same date of all months.
However you asked me about internet connection's bill last month.
I already checked my account and the payment was successful.
You have to check this problem.
If you want my payment list, I can send my payment list through Fax.
Please after checking it, call me.
Thanks you.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are very good at creating a situation. Some reminders:
\'problem\' is a noun so it needs an adjective
example: some problem
Teacher Venus^^
Hello.
>>>CORRECT
I am calling you because I think you have something problem.
>>>I am calling you because I think you have some problem.
I am using your internet connection every month.
>>>CORRECT
Also I always paid my bill same date of all months.
>>>Also I always paid my bill at the same date every month.
However you asked me about internet connection\'s bill last month.
>>>However you asked me about my internet connection\'s bill last month.
I already checked my account and the payment was successful.
>>>CORRECT
You have to check this problem.
>>>CORRECT
If you want my payment list, I can send my payment list through Fax.
>>>CORRECT
Please after checking it, call me.
>>>CORRECT
Thanks you.
>>>Thank you.
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