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2015-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Hello. I am calling you because I think you have something problem. I am using your internet connection every month. Also I always paid my bill same date of all months. However you asked me about internet connection's bill last month. I already checked my account and the payment was successful. You have to check this problem. If you want my payment list, I can send my payment list through Fax. Please after checking it, call me. Thanks you.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You are very good at creating a situation. Some reminders: \'problem\' is a noun so it needs an adjective example: some problem   Teacher Venus^^   Hello. >>>CORRECT I am calling you because I think you have something problem. >>>I am calling you because I think you have some problem. I am using your internet connection every month. >>>CORRECT Also I always paid my bill same date of all months. >>>Also I always paid my bill at the same date every month. However you asked me about internet connection\'s bill last month. >>>However you asked me about my internet connection\'s bill last month. I already checked my account and the payment was successful. >>>CORRECT You have to check this problem. >>>CORRECT If you want my payment list, I can send my payment list through Fax. >>>CORRECT Please after checking it, call me. >>>CORRECT Thanks you. >>>Thank you.

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