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"Most people flet about the university. But what's the matter of my house? no way! If i can't pay my tuition, i will move out and live by myslef!" james who is stuying hard but stubborn glared his father and then went out of the room, frowning. His mother who was watching him suddenly cried out. His mother whimpered and said to her husband with reproachful voice. "You should recover yourself. We have many things to do for childred. why are you always lying down like that? I can't support them by myself. It is impossible."

Hi there! I almost cried while reading your composition. Hu-hu. Anyway, you did great in formulating such dialogue. You were able to use proper punctuation marks. Good job! Here\'s my corrections. I hope I was able to help. We can talk about this in our class. ^^   ~T.Mona~   \"Most people flet about the university. But what\'s the matter of my house? no way!>>You mean: \"Most people think about entering a university but what\'s the matter with my house?No way!\"If i can\'t pay my tuition, i will move out and live by myslef!\">>correct (*Becareful with you captalization and spelling of \'myself\')james who is stuying hard but stubborn glared his father and then went out of the room, frowning.>>James, who is studying so hard glared at his father and went out of the room with a frown on his forehead. >>or James, who is studying so hard glared at his father and went out of the room frowning.His mother who was watching him suddenly cried out.>>His mother who\'s watching him suddenly cried. His mother whimpered and said to her husband with reproachful voice.>>His mother whimpered and talk to her husband with an approachful voice.\"You should recover yourself. We have many things to do for childred.>>\"You have to recover bacause we have so many things to do for our children\".why are you always lying down like that? >>\"Why do you always lay down like that?\"I can\'t support them by myself. It is impossible.\" >>correct