3-39th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! ^_^
Happy Friday again!
I hope you\'re having a great day despite the very cold weather.
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework.
I really like reading your thoughts. :)
Anyhow, I think inside every problem lies an opportunity and in every disappointment lies a priceless gem of wisdom.
I honestly believe that people learn more from losing than winning.
Losing or disappointments are always part of success.
It just depends on how you see them and deal with them.
I\'ll see you again on Tuesday.
Take care.
~Teacher C[이름] :)
People want to win when they do something.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> People want to come out as the victor when they do something.
At the start, people think the they can do anything without other\'s helps.
>> At the start, people think the they can do anything without others\' help/s.
Unfortunately, they finally know that they don\'t do it as they thought about it in the start.
>> [Do you mean]: Unfortunately, they eventually realize that they can\'t do it the way they\'ve thought about in the start.
And then, we try to find a solution and a help from others, intending to cover their faults.
>> And then, we try to find a solution and help from others, to cover our faults.
OR >> And then, we try to find a solution and help from others with the intention of covering our faults.
Discovering our fault to colleagues is not easy if there are much competition in the organization.
>> Uncovering our fault to our colleagues is not easy if there is much competition in the organization.
Learning is also sometimes very difficult if we don\'t have a mind that we could learn from others.
>> Learning is also sometimes very difficult if we don\'t realize that we could learn from others.
I think the ability that we can draw out other\'s ability or strength is a real power we must have.
>> I think the ability to draw out other\'s ability or strength is a real power we must have.
To do this, we have to open our mindset ourselves.
>> To do this, we have to open our minds and ourselves.
That is that we would learn it from anybody or teach it to anybody.
>> That is what we could learn from others and teach to others.
There is a story in the ancient china.
>> There is a story in (the) ancient China.
The story say that if there are 3 persons walking together on the road, there must be a teacher among them.
>> The story says that if there are 3 persons walking together on the road, there must be a teacher among them.
The teacher would not be old or not younger.
>> [Do you mean]: The teacher could either be the older or the younger one.
It say that we would learn from anybody and in anywhere.
>> It says that we would learn from anybody and anywhere.
So, learning is important.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That is why learning is important.
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