3-3rd Homework

I don't really understand why the animals should be kept in capacity. Do you know a movie? The name of the movie is "Planet Of The Apes". In this movie, there was a scene that humans were kept in a cage for apes to investigate. The vocal cords of humans was cut. When I saw the scene, I was shocked. Humans were just like animals in zoos. Basically, I oppose the zoo. The zoo is absolutely for human's convenient. Humans want to see many animals without any dangers, so they constructed the cage to safely see animals. This is zoo. The animals in the zoo have a unhappy face whenever I visit. In Korea, there are several zoos. No matter what the zoo is big or small size, the animals are locked in the cage just like a prison if we think as humans. Think about that, if you are locked in the prison without any reasons. Maybe, you will be crazy. Finally, as soon as you find you cannot escape from there, you will give up without vigor. That is very terrible. So, I oppose all zoos in the world.

Hi, [이름]! ^_^ Thank you for immediately answering our essay question for today. I think your opinions are really good and well thought of. In addition to that, your sentences are also nice so good job! ^_^ I agree that animals should never be placed in captivity because like us, they have feelings too. I have seen the movie you were talking about and I realized how terrible it must be like to be trapped inside a cage and be tortured for no reason. If animals could only talk, they would tell us not to cage them and not to treat them cruelly. I strongly oppose zoos as well and I stopped going to a zoo fifteen years ago. It was a silent protest and it\'s good that nobody in my city has ever thought of building a zoo. People are often cruel and ruthless. Anyhow, I hope you are doing great. See you again on Tuesday. :) ~Teacher C[이름] I don\'t really understand why the animals should be kept in capacity. >> I don\'t really understand why the animals should be kept in captivity. Do you know a movie? The name of the movie is \"Planet Of The Apes\". >> Do you know the movie entitled: \"Planet Of The Apes\"? In this movie, there was a scene that humans were kept in a cage for apes to investigate. >> In this movie, there was a scene where humans were kept in a cage for apes to investigate. The vocal cords of humans was cut. >> The vocal cords of humans were cut. When I saw the scene, I was shocked. >> CORRECT! OR >> I was shocked when I saw that part of the movie. Humans were just like animals in zoos. >> CORRECT! OR >> The humans in the movie were just like the animals in zoos. Basically, I oppose the zoo. >> CORRECT! OR >> I basically don\'t agree that animals should be kept in a zoo. The zoo is absolutely for human\'s convenient. >> The zoo is absolutely for human\'s convenience. Humans want to see many animals without any dangers, so they constructed the cage to safely see animals. >> CORRECT!0 OR >> People want to see a lot of animals without the danger of getting hurt so they built cages where they could put the animals and watch them from a safe distance. This is zoo. >> This is a zoo. The animals in the zoo have a unhappy face whenever I visit. >> The animals in the zoo have an unhappy face whenever I visit. In Korea, there are several zoos. >> CORRECT! OR >> There are a lot of zoos in Korea. No matter what the zoo is big or small size, the animals are locked in the cage just like a prison if we think as humans. >> No matter how big or how small a zoo is, the animals are still locked up inside a cage just like humans in a prison. Think about that, if you are locked in the prison without any reasons. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: If you are going to think about it, you are locked up without any reasons. Maybe, you will be crazy. >> CORRECT! OR >> You will probably go crazy. Finally, as soon as you find you cannot escape from there, you will give up without vigor. >> Finally, as soon as you find out that you cannot escape from there, you will give up without vigor. That is very terrible. >> CORRECT! OR >> I think that is very horrible. So, I oppose all zoos in the world. >> CORRECT! OR >> That is why I oppose  all zoos in the world.