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2018-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Hi, teacher Lynn! Thank you for your message. I love that sentence about choosing happiness. I choose to be happy today:) I hope you will. My homework follow: Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. A: I agree that statement. Because people always want to be improving themselves. That is why people learn other somethings such as foreign languages, sports and so on. People call that self-improvement. I think that if we had just satisfied what we have, there would not have been such a wonderful development now.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!(\",)

Glad you like it!  Yap, I choose to be happy too!(\",)

You are right but I sometimes wonder if people are satisfied with what they have, isn\'t that complete happiness?

~T. Lynn

Hi, teacher Lynn! 

>> correct!
 Thank you for your message.

>> correct!
 I love that sentence about choosing happiness.

>> correct!
 I choose to be happy today:)

>> correct!
 I hope you will.
>> correct!
My homework follows:
>> correct!
Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. 
A: I agree that statement.

>> I agree with that statement.
 Because people always want to be improving themselves.

>> Because people always want to improve themselves.
That is why people learn other somethings such as foreign languages, sports and so on.

>> That is why people learn other things such as foreign languages, sports and so on.

People call that self-improvement.

>> correct!
 I think that if we had just satisfied what we have, there would not have been such a wonderful development now.

>> I think that if we had just been satisfied with what we have, there would not have been such wonderful developments now.

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