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2017-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

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Last friday, we invited my father-in-law to our home. That day was my father's birthday. Our Korean cook and eat a seaweed stew when their birthday. I decided to cook a seaweed soup, which is few food I can cook well for him. I prepared the stew as soon as I came back home at 7:30, cause father-in-law would arrive at 9 pm. Cooking a seaweed stew takes about 1 hour. and we also prepared some dishes such as a "Bulgogi" and a cake. Finally he came home and seated at the table, I felt nervous that I wasn't sure if he loved to eat. Fotunately he ate it all without a even one stock, and he liked our cash gift also. I cooked a spicy kimchi stew to relieve a hangover last night. This weekend, it feels like I would be a good cook.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름]!!

You are such a great son!! I believe your father is very proud to have you!!


~Teacher Megan~


Last Friday, we invited my father-in-law to our home.

>>> Correct.


That day was my father\'s birthday. Our Korean cook and eat a seaweed stew when their birthday.

>>> That day was my father\'s birthday. Korean\'s cook and eat a seaweed stew on their birthday.


I decided to cook a seaweed soup, which is few food I can cook well for him.

>>> Correct.


I prepared the stew as soon as I came back home at 7:30, cause father-in-law would arrive at 9 pm.

>>> Correct.


Cooking a seaweed stew takes about 1 hour. and we also prepared some dishes such as a \"Bulgogi\" and a cake.

>>> Correct.


Finally he came home and seated at the table, I felt nervous that I wasn\'t sure if he loved to eat.

>>> Finally he came home and was seated at the table, I felt nervous since I wasn\'t sure if he\'ll loved it.


Fortunately he ate it all without a even one stock, and he liked our cash gift also.

>>> Correct.


I cooked a spicy kimchi stew to relieve a hangover last night. This weekend, it feels like I would be a good cook.

>>> Correct.

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