3/4 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for your homework! ^ ^ Wow! And thank you for sharing about your brother having plastic surgery. ^ ^ It\'s good that he was able to achieve the look that he wanted. It\'s unfortunate that for some people it becomes an addiction. Or, if the result is not achieved, either they do the procedure over and over again. I hope that our young generation these days will not have a shallow perception of what real beauty is! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

This is my younger brother, hahaha.

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My younger brother had plastic surgeries to his nose and eyes.

>>My younger brother had plastic surgery with his nose and eyes. OR

>>My younger brother had his nose and eyes done.

I opposed his surgeries so much.

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But, He became happy after that, and his self-confidence was increased a lot.

>>But, he became so happy after that and had a boost of self-confidence.
I saw many adverse reactions on TV.

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People having adverse reactions to plastic surgeries regret about that.

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And some people repeat surgeries like an addiction.

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However, my younger brother has no idea after then.

>>However, my younger brother had no idea then. 
He just became more handsome, and that\'s it.

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He doesn\'t want to do more.

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I agree with his opinion now.

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I don\'t want to have plastic surgery, but someone having self-reproach to their appearance needs plastic surgery.

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However, I think that excessive advertisement for the plastic surgery hospital should be restricted as law.

>>However, I think that excessive advertisement for the plastic surgery hospitals should be banned by the law.
It can affect negatively teenagers.

>>It can affect teenagers negatively.