3-40th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^^

It\'s another cold day in my city.

Thank you for promptly doing your essay homework for today. ^_^
I think staying committed to the task at hand no matter how difficult it is, is really important.

Not only because it helps you become a persevering person but also helps you become a tolerant and patient one.

I hope you\'re having a great day.

I\'ll see you again on Thursday.

Take care. ^^

~Teacher C[이름]

To accomplish the task you have decided is not easy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Accomplishing the task you have decided to take on is not easy.

Generally, we often misunderstand the process that we can enough to endure it.

>> [Do you mean]: Generally, we often misunderstand the process that we cannot endure it.
And then we start to achieve it with this mistake.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> And then we start to achieve this kind of mentality.
At the start, we never think about the failure and we never consider it after being fail.

>> At the start, we never think about the failure and we never consider it after failing.
It\'s because no one starts to do it thinking about the failure.

>> It\'s because no one starts to do it by thinking about the failure.
However, there are many obstacles for you to discourage, we didn\'t consider before starting.

>> [Do you mean]: However, there are many obstacles that would discourage us that we don\'t (usually) consider before starting.
Sometimes, you would think why you have to do it even if it is a very difficult thing.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Sometimes, you wonder why you have to do it even if it is a very difficult task.
And then, I think you will think that If you don\'t endure it at this time, you could not achieve anything.

>> And then, I think you will think that if you don\'t endure it at this time, you could not achieve anything.

Yeah, it is vey important to achieve something.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is true that it is vey important to achieve something.
I saw a TV show about the children education several years ago.

>> I saw a TV show about the children\'s education several years ago.
On the TV show, many parents often say to their children that you could do that and you always do well.

>> On the TV show, many parents often say to their children that, \"you could do that and always do well (in school)\".
But the TV show say that even if their children can be fail, they always say like that.

>> But the TV show says that even if their children can fail, they always say that.
So, after being adults they would not endure about the failure himself.

>> So, after being adults they would not endure their own failures.