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2015-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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In my opinion, most pets gives endless love for their owner. Nowadays many children are very selfish. When the children take care of pets, they learn about love and responsibility. Taking care of a pet is the advantages. However, most pets need the help of someone. So owners have to help them everyday. Taking care of a pet is very hard. Also owner have to clean because of animal hair. I am lazy so it is disadvantages.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You are doing much better today. Let\'s differentiate these words: advantage- any circumstance, opportunity, or means specially favorable to success   advantagoeus - Affording advantage; favorable or beneficial   Teacher Venus^^   In my opinion, most pets gives endless love for their owner. >>>In my opinion, most pets give endless love to their owner. Nowadays many children are very selfish. >>>CORRECT When the children take care of pets, they learn about love and responsibility. >>>CORRECT Taking care of a pet is the advantages. >>>Taking care of a pet is one of the advantages. However, most pets need the help of someone. >>>CORRECT So owners have to help them everyday. >>>CORRECT Taking care of a pet is very hard. >>>CORRECT Also owner have to clean because of animal hair. >>>Also the owner has to clean pet hair. I am lazy so it is disadvantages. >>>I am lazy so it is disadvantageous.

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