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In my opinion, most pets gives endless love for their owner.
Nowadays many children are very selfish.
When the children take care of pets, they learn about love and responsibility.
Taking care of a pet is the advantages.
However, most pets need the help of someone.
So owners have to help them everyday.
Taking care of a pet is very hard.
Also owner have to clean because of animal hair.
I am lazy so it is disadvantages.
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Hello [이름]!
You are doing much better today. Let\'s differentiate these words:
advantage-
any circumstance, opportunity, or means specially favorable to success
advantagoeus
- Affording advantage; favorable or beneficial
Teacher Venus^^
In my opinion, most pets gives endless love for their owner.
>>>In my opinion, most pets give endless love to their owner.
Nowadays many children are very selfish.
>>>CORRECT
When the children take care of pets, they learn about love and responsibility.
>>>CORRECT
Taking care of a pet is the advantages.
>>>Taking care of a pet is one of the advantages.
However, most pets need the help of someone.
>>>CORRECT
So owners have to help them everyday.
>>>CORRECT
Taking care of a pet is very hard.
>>>CORRECT
Also owner have to clean because of animal hair.
>>>Also the owner has to clean pet hair.
I am lazy so it is disadvantages.
>>>I am lazy so it is disadvantageous.
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