3-41th Homework

Hello, [이름]! ^_^

Are you still doing great? I hope you are. :)

Thank you for promptly doing your essay homework.

I think you wrote an essay really fast and your writing skill is improving a lot.

I think an advice is good but not all advice are applicable in all situations.

That\'s why sometimes, you have to be careful with the kind of advice that you take.

Anyhow, that is my point-of-view in this matter.

I\'ll see you again tomorrow.

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~Teacher C[이름] ^_^

I think all things in the world has an appropriate time to be taken or to get it.

>> I think all things in the world has an appropriate time to be taken or to get.
Good advice is good but sometimes would be not good for someone.

>> Good advice is good but sometimes, it is not good for someone.
When many people struggled to find a solution in the serious situation, they want to help them with good advice.

>> [Do you mean]: When people struggle to find a solution in the/a serious situation, they ask for a good advice that would help them.
I think there would be a proper time to be taken it.

>> I think there would be a proper time to take it.

OR >> I think there would be a proper time for it to be taken.
When they seriously want to get the advice from others, if they don\'t get any advice from advice they pretend to keep going by themselves without any help.

>> When they seriously want to get the advice from others but don\'t get it, they pretend to keep going by themselves without any help.
And then even if there is any advice, they would refuse it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> And when an advice is available, they would refuse it.
It\'s because they are already hurt by being taken any help from others.

>> It\'s because they are already hurt by taking help from others.
So, even if we want to help them, they will refuse it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why even if we want to extend our help, they will turn it down.
So I think timing is a very important thing.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my opinion, timing is a very important thing.
When someone find a help from others, one\'s pride has been already hurt.

>> When someone finds help from others, one\'s pride has been already hurt.
So, when you request a help from others, if you are not in the situation where you could not help them, I think you would be better to help them.

>> So, when you request help from others, if you are not in the situation where you could not help them, I think it would be better to help.

After it\'s gone away, the help would be useless.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> After it has passed, the help would be useless.
It\'s my thought today.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s my thought for today.