3-42th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

It\'s really cold in my city today.

How are you doing so far?

Thanks for doing your essay homework.

I think failure is part of success. It\'s because without failure, we wouldn\'t learn to appreciate the efforts that we give.

Success is good but you cannot win all the time.

It\'s almost like learning how to ride a bike. I\'ve never seen anyone ride a bike well after the first try.

You have to fall first before you learn how to stand.

Anyhow, that\'s how I see failure.

I hope you\'re having a great day.

See you again next week.

Take care.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

If we take a success from our actions, we would very delight.

>> If we take success from our actions, we would be very delighted.
If we have a failure from out actions even if we do best, we would discourage.

>> If we fail from our actions, even if we do our best, we would be discouraged.
In many cases, we misunderstand that there is nothing to get from our actions if we win.

>> In many cases, we misunderstand that there is nothing we could get from our actions if we win.
And, after failing our actions, we just discourage and then we never want to do anything.

>>  And, after our failing actions, we just get discouraged and then we never want to do anything.
We know that both has some information or something to learn from there.

>> We know that both have some information or something to learn from.
But if we win, we easily forget it, and if we fail, we cannot do anything.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Both have disadvantages because when we win, we easily forget the lesson and when we lose, we become helpless.
I personally think we can more learn something when we fail, if we lose a courage.

>> [Do you mean]: I personally think we can learn more when we fail and lose courage.
Everybody wants to succeed, nobody wants to fail.

>> Everybody wants to succeed. Nobody wants to fail.
When we start doing something, we first think the success.

>> When we start doing something, we first think of the success.
So, if it became fail, there would be a lot of discourage.

>> So, if it became a failure, there would be a lot of discouragement.
We always want to get something that we desire, but we can\'t do it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We often want to have the things that we desire, but we can\'t do it.
So, when we start to work. we have to think about the failure. Even if it is not good to your works.

>> So, when we start to work, we have to think about the failure even if it is not good to/for our work.
\'Try and error\' is very good thing, I think.

>> Trial and error is a very good thing, I think.
We could not get anything without a failure.

>> We could not get anything without failure.